As for feedback, the content that is there is good. I would suggest finding an alternative way to delivering that extremely long narrative at the start. Having to read several walls of text before you even know if you are going to like the game or not is a big pill to swallow.
Perhaps break it up into single paragraphs that display over a relatable background image? ... and yes, I know this would mean you would have to make those images yourself. However, this is the foundation of the story, is it not? You'll be very grateful to have something so important polished up well as it sets the tone for the whole game for those starting off in it.
Thanks for the feedback! Yes, I'm certainly planning present the backstory with images in the future. It was actually created as one of the last things on the game, so I decided to leave it as text version for now.
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Does the Android have the same content that the Apple etc have? I only ask due to the size difference
Yes. Same content, but images are compressed and slightly lower quality to run better on adroid devices and bypass apk file size restrictions
Alright, thanks! I know practically nothing about being a dev so I wasn't sure! Lol.
I'll be keeping an eye on this one for sure.
As for feedback, the content that is there is good. I would suggest finding an alternative way to delivering that extremely long narrative at the start. Having to read several walls of text before you even know if you are going to like the game or not is a big pill to swallow.
Perhaps break it up into single paragraphs that display over a relatable background image?
... and yes, I know this would mean you would have to make those images yourself. However, this is the foundation of the story, is it not? You'll be very grateful to have something so important polished up well as it sets the tone for the whole game for those starting off in it.
Thanks for the feedback! Yes, I'm certainly planning present the backstory with images in the future. It was actually created as one of the last things on the game, so I decided to leave it as text version for now.
Really liked this first release, hoping this will be a success and look forward to future updates
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!